Tuesday, March 24, 2026

I did not know that

 

I'm sure most of us know of the poem "Desiderata", published by Max Ehrmann in 1927.  Its original text may be found here, if you're interested.  It was originally little known, but became very popular during the 1960's and 1970's, probably spurred on by the "Hippie" era.  A well-known musical audio recording of the poem was published by Les Crane in 1971.  It became well-known for its chorus:

You are a child of the universe
No less than the trees and the stars;
You have a right to be here.
And whether or not it is clear to you,
No doubt the universe is unfolding as it should.

What I didn't know until yesterday was that in 1972, a musical response to the poem was published, titled "Deteriorata".  Wikipedia reports:

The parody was written by Tony Hendra for National Lampoon magazine, and was recorded for the album Radio Dinner. Narrator Norman Rose read the parody poem and Melissa Manchester was the background vocalist, both closely tracking the format of Crane's original. Christopher Guest wrote the music.

The original musical version may be found here, and an annotated text version here.  The chorus shows, shall we say, a rather less reverent approach to life than the original!

You are a fluke of the universe
You have no right to be here
And whether you can hear it or not
The universe is laughing behind your back

As a man of faith, I naturally hew more to the original version than the follow-up.  However, as a human being, I have to giggle at the snark factor of "Deteriorata".  I suppose, in due time, we'll all find out which is the most accurate!



Peter


10 comments:

SiGraybeard said...

Obligatory Old Man story: I remember that! Both the desiderata and the deteriorata. 1972 was when I graduated high school.

Anonymous said...

Deteriorata was on National Lampoon’s Radio Dinner LP. It’s loaded with hilarious skits and songs, some performed by Dylan and Baez sound alike. Still funny after all these years.

Mike said...

Yep- another old man here- had the album, forgot about the song…. Good times….

Rick T said...

Dr Demento played Deteriorata more than a few times on his show. Desiderata occasionally got air time on the mundane radio stations too.

NatLamp was up there with Firesign Theater for long-form spoken humor back in the 60s/70s.

Anonymous said...

I was a junior in High School.
I heard the parody years before I heard the original.

I like the parody.

Have a Good Day

Technomad said...

I loved Deteriorata.

pyotr said...

I'm fan of a Sci-Fi Space/Military opera series which has the premise that the Universe is Malevolent, but easily amused by humans.

Ask not "What could go wrong?" for it will hurt. A lot. And the universe will laugh nebulae and galaxies into existence. (And messing with time travel just makes things worse for you.)

Anonymous said...

Same. The NL was "off-the chain" hilarious in those days. Their high school yearbook was simply a seminal work of art. Many of these writers were responsible for the movie "Caddyshack."

Anonymous said...

Didn't Ed Ames do a recorded version? He was one of the "Ames Brothers" and of course Mingo the Indian on Daniel Boone tv show.

Old NFO said...

Ah yes, Dr Demento... listened to him for years.